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The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The display line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. The data is on a number of people and time. The time is from 6:00 to 22:00. In 6:00 there are 100 people, at 7:00 there are 200, at 8:00 there are 400, at 9:00 there are 300, at 10:00 there are 200
as well as
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 at 11:00 there are
also
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 200, at 12:00 there are 300, at 14:00 there are 300, at 15:00 there are 200, at 16:00 there are nearly 90, at 17:00 there are 200, at 18:00 there are 400, at 19:00 there are 100, at 20:00 there are 100, at 21:00 there are 150 and 22:00 there are 100.
To conclude
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, the above information describes number of people and time at Paris Metro station passengers.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase
  • rush-hour peak
  • commuting
  • sharp drop
  • midday
  • gradual increase
  • afternoon peak
  • gradual decline
  • late evening
  • sharp decrease
  • number of passengers
  • reach its highest point
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