You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email -give details of the purchase -describe the problem -explain why you need a replacement urgently

#purchase #company #email #-give #-describe #-explain #replacement

Dear Sir or Madam, I have been a satisfied customer for several years, but I am writing regarding the night

dress

I purchased online yesterday. Since I am supposed to wear

this

dress

at a wedding as one of the bride’s maids, the colour must match the theme colcolourhich is ocean blue. I saw the

dress

on your website and

according to

its pictures, that was the exact colour I had been looking for, but the moment I received my order I found some flaws, which I will explain here. The foremost problem is that not only is the shade similar to the original picture but it is not categorized as color blue.

Secondly

, the model I have received is strapless which is contrary to my order. I ,

therefore

,request that you replace my

dress

with the correct

dress

as soon as possible as the wedding is at the weekend,

hence

, I would not have enough time to find another

dress

that matches perfectly with the theme. I

also

ask you to confirm to me in writing that

this

has been actioned, by sending me the exact picture of my order before sending it. I look forward to receiving your confirmation. Kind Regards, Taniya Ansari

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

205 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to inform you about a recent purchase I made from your company
I am disappointed with the quality/fitting of the clothing
The fabric/material used is substandard/defective
The color/design does not match the product description
The size is incorrect, and it does not fit me properly
I urgently require a replacement as I have an upcoming event/function
I would appreciate it if you could expedite the process
I expect a prompt response and resolution to this matter
I suggest a refund or replacement of the item

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Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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