You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line
graph
illustrates the
number
of passengers travelling through the Paris metro
station
at different times of the day.
Overall
, we can observe the
number
of people travelling during the metro
station
at 16 different hours of the day from 6 am in the morning to 10 p.
m
.
Furthermore
, we can see a steady rise in the
number
of passengers commuting through the metro
station
from around 6.30 am in the morning to approximately 8.30
am
Correct your spelling
a.m.
. peaking at 400 people passing through that time. There is a dramatic decrease in the passenger count to around 10.30 a.
m
.
Moreover
, the count of people using the
station
is stable until approximately 2.30 p.
m
. with some minor fluctuations.
However
, there is a drastic decrease in the
number
of travellers when the time is around 4.30 p.
m
, reaching the bottom of the
graph
once again after it being at 6.30 a.
m
.
Although
, there is a massive rise in commuters travelling at approximately 6.30
pm
achieving its second peak in the
graph
. Surprisingly, there is another big drop in the
graph
from 6.30
pm
to 8.30
pm
where it reaches the bottom of the
graph
for the third time.
In addition
to
this
, we can see the passenger count being rather stable from 8.30
pm
to 10.30
pm
having one fluctuation.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, number, station, m, pm with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase
  • rush-hour peak
  • commuting
  • sharp drop
  • midday
  • gradual increase
  • afternoon peak
  • gradual decline
  • late evening
  • sharp decrease
  • number of passengers
  • reach its highest point
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