The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line
graph
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illustrates the
number
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of passengers travelling through the Paris metro
station
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at different times of the day.
Overall
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, we can observe the
number
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of people travelling during the metro
station
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at 16 different hours of the day from 6 am in the morning to 10 p.
m
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.
Furthermore
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, we can see a steady rise in the
number
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of passengers commuting through the metro
station
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from around 6.30 am in the morning to approximately 8.30
am
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a.m.
. peaking at 400 people passing through that time. There is a dramatic decrease in the passenger count to around 10.30 a.
m
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.
Moreover
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, the count of people using the
station
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is stable until approximately 2.30 p.
m
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. with some minor fluctuations.
However
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, there is a drastic decrease in the
number
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of travellers when the time is around 4.30 p.
m
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, reaching the bottom of the
graph
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once again after it being at 6.30 a.
m
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.
Although
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, there is a massive rise in commuters travelling at approximately 6.30
pm
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achieving its second peak in the
graph
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. Surprisingly, there is another big drop in the
graph
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from 6.30
pm
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to 8.30
pm
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where it reaches the bottom of the
graph
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for the third time.
In addition
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to
this
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, we can see the passenger count being rather stable from 8.30
pm
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to 10.30
pm
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having one fluctuation.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, number, station, m, pm with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase
  • rush-hour peak
  • commuting
  • sharp drop
  • midday
  • gradual increase
  • afternoon peak
  • gradual decline
  • late evening
  • sharp decrease
  • number of passengers
  • reach its highest point
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