You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line
graph
illustrates the number
of passengers travelling through the Paris metro station
at different times of the day.
Overall
, we can observe the number
of people travelling during the metro station
at 16 different hours of the day from 6 am in the morning to 10 p.m
.
Furthermore
, we can see a steady rise in the number
of passengers commuting through the metro station
from around 6.30 am in the morning to approximately 8.30 am
. peaking at 400 people passing through that time. There is a dramatic decrease in the passenger count to around 10.30 a.Correct your spelling
a.m.
m
.
Moreover
, the count of people using the station
is stable until approximately 2.30 p.m
. with some minor fluctuations. However
, there is a drastic decrease in the number
of travellers when the time is around 4.30 p.m
, reaching the bottom of the graph
once again after it being at 6.30 a.m
. Although
, there is a massive rise in commuters travelling at approximately 6.30 pm
achieving its second peak in the graph
. Surprisingly, there is another big drop in the graph
from 6.30 pm
to 8.30 pm
where it reaches the bottom of the graph
for the third time. In addition
to this
, we can see the passenger count being rather stable from 8.30 pm
to 10.30 pm
having one fluctuation.Submitted by srinathan.raghu on
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