The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton,and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The map

illustrate

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industrial

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the industrial

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area in the town of Norbiton

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and

planned

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the planned

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future

deleopment

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development

of the site.Looking for an

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perspective,In the future development replacing the factories to built shops,medical

center

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,playground etc

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current

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town,more

number of

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factories

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located and in the roundabout which is in

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the center

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center

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there are only two roads connected with

roundabout

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west to east and north to south.

River

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is located close to the farmland.In planned future development all factories were replaced by shops,medical

center

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playground

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,school

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Sep 29, 2023

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

78 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned future development
factories
warehouses
railway line
shopping center
residential buildings
college
mixed-use zone
commercial
residential
educational
green spaces
pedestrian walkways
housing
community
retail services
revitalize
quality of life
vibrant
sustainable

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