The map illustrates the between and predicted future Islip town centre.

The map illustrates the between and predicted future Islip town centre.
The provided diagram demonstrates the development of Islip city centre in future and current town throughout the reporting period. In
this
, essay I will critique and show the relevant differences between both maps. From an
overall
perspective, it is clear from the map that Islip City Heart will be experiencing dramatic adjustments in the near upcoming years. It is noticeable that the main pathway will be reconstructed into a dual carriageway which will cover all of the town
whereas
the old main road will be available for pedestrians only. Observing the details, it is remarkable that the northern main street which used to be the shops will be changing into a shopping mall along the lines of other facilities
such
as a bus station, car park and new residential. Comparably, the south shops will be maintained as it is in the current era
while
in, contrast there will be some revolution like the adjustment of the park and the existence of new housing
however
, both of the old residents will be slightly shifting
although
the school remains identically. To summarise, with what has been analysed and compared, it is crucial to highlight that there will be many constructions in the future.
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