the bar chart below shows the top ten countrie for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
The bar chart illustrates the number of production and consumption of electricity in various nations in the year 2014.
Overall
, China's usage of current was higher than the other nine countries. Linking Words
In contrast
, Korea.Rep was the least in those ports.
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To begin
, china used to produce 5.398 watts and it's exhausted, most be it at 5,322 billion Linking Words
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. Comparatively, it was higher than the other countries. The United States accounted for 4,099 which was debited to 3,866, followed by Russia which produced 1,057 and withdrew 1,038 Use synonyms
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. Japan's manufacturing rate was 936.24 they used over 856.7 watts. India was the fifth country, it delivered 871 watts, and Use synonyms
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nation utilized 698.8 billion Linking Words
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over the year.
When looking at the second set of Countries, Canada manufactured 618.9 Canadian citizens utilized 499. 9 kuh. France and Brazil were using under 500 Use synonyms
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from below 565 Use synonyms
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. Germany produced 526.6 from 1582 Use synonyms
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which was used more than their production rate. Use synonyms
Finally
, Korea accounted for 485.1 Linking Words
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they were exhausting 449.5 Use synonyms
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de electricity Use synonyms
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