the bar chart below shows the top ten countrie for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
The bar chart illustrates the number of production and consumption of electricity in various nations in the year 2014.
Overall
, China's usage of current was higher than the other nine countries. In contrast
, Korea.Rep was the least in those ports.
To begin
, china used to produce 5.398 watts and it's exhausted, most be it at 5,322 billion kWh
. Comparatively, it was higher than the other countries. The United States accounted for 4,099 which was debited to 3,866, followed by Russia which produced 1,057 and withdrew 1,038 kWh
. Japan's manufacturing rate was 936.24 they used over 856.7 watts. India was the fifth country, it delivered 871 watts, and this
nation utilized 698.8 billion kWh
over the year.
When looking at the second set of Countries, Canada manufactured 618.9 Canadian citizens utilized 499. 9 kuh. France and Brazil were using under 500 kWh
from below 565 kWh
. Germany produced 526.6 from 1582 kWh
which was used more than their production rate. Finally
, Korea accounted for 485.1 kWh
they were exhausting 449.5 kWh
de electricity at the end
of the yearSubmitted by katrvn.subramaniyan on
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