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Some people think that a high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that a good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #salary #company #work #atmosphere
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A good
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job
 is
one
 of the main components of our life.
To begin
 with, we study at school,
then
 university,
pass
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and pass
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 various courses, different
interviewes
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interviews
interviewees
 and tests to achieve
this
 goal.
Haveing
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 coped
all
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 these steps, we
finally
 get
dream
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a dream
the dream
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job
. So,
then
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a lot of people ask: " What is better,
high
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a high
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salary
 or satisfaction?" On the
one
 hand, it seems to me,
satisfaction
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that satisfaction
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, that we get making different task in good working atmosphere, is more important.
For example
, we
gets
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 positive emotions, we are full of energy and ready for new aims, when we work with our friends. It's great when you can confidently say, that you are in
a
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the
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 right place.
One
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 the other hand, I realize,
that is
 difficult to imagine
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a good
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 life without
high
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a high
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salary
.
Firstly
, we can't even visit a doctor or buy medicine without money. Unfortunately,
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 atmosphere in your company will not help in
this
 case.
Secondly
,
traveling
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travelling
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 can give more positive emotions and satisfaction. Of course, it's not possible without
well-paid
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a well-paid
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job
.
Thirdly
,
quality
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the quality
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 of our life depends on
salary
. We usually pay for different things,
such
 as
flat
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, car, food, clothes etc.
As a result
, our dream
job
 with
good
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a good
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 atmosphere can become the worst
one
. Of course, I think, that our mental valuas should be
on
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in
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 the first place, but it is not possible now. To cut a long story short, it is
pleasure
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a pleasure
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 to have
desirable
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a desirable
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job
 with
friendly
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a friendly
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atmosphare
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atmosphere
, but
high
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a high
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salary
 is more important in our world.
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