The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the development of the town of Westley between 1815 and the current time.
Overall
, it can be seen that it has been subjected to different changes and more men-made structures have taken place
instead
of the fields and
Lenton
woods. In the southwest corner of the map, fields have been cleared to make way for a main railway station
in addition
to a railway extending from the southwest to the northwest of the map. To the right homes have been converted into a shopping, business and residential area. A cinema was
also
constructed
while
the market square and town hall remained unaltered. In the centre,
Lenton
Woods has been cut down and replaced with two newly constructed buildings: West Gate
shopping
Capitalize word
Shopping
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Centre and
Lenton
Housing Estate. To its left, the Coach
inn
Capitalize word
Inn
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has been demolished and converted into a sports centre and a museum.
Finally
, on the northeast upper side of the map, Lord's Westley house has been knocked down and converted into the Red Lion Pub and
Lenton
Hotel
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