the bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
The production and use of electricity, measured in
kWh
, was demonstrated in the chart between ten states over a year period in 2014.
Overall
, what stands out from the bar chart is that China headed the list with the USA, while
Brazil, Germany and Korea produced and consumed less the
electricity during the period in question.
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place was China with fabrication Add an article
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5,398
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kWh
and intake 5,322
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of 5,322
billion
kWh
, making it far more successful than the USA with generation 4.099
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of 4.099
billion
kWh
and consumption 3,866
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of 3,866
billion
kWh
. Ranked in third place was Russia with almost equally
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billion
and 1,038 billion
, respectively. Next came Japan and India with a small difference, 936,2 billion
kWh
and 871 billion
kWh
of production and 856,7 billion
kWh
and 696,6 billion
kWh
of consumption. Bottom
of the list was Germany, where the use is slightly higher than fabrication, with 582,5 and 526,6 Correct article usage
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billion
respectively, while
Korea produced 485 billion
and consumed 449 billion
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