People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
There has been an increasing number of
people
dwelling in metropolises. Besides
the conventions that urban life offers, city dwellers have to deal with several issues such
as contamination and shortage of jobs. Therefore
, some people
think governments should support people
to relocate to smaller areas, but I believe this
is impossible, instead
there are other better solutions.
There are two serious issues that urban residents are facing, namely: pollution - health problems
and high unemployment rate. Firstly
, population explosion in metropolises lead to many environmental problems
, especially air contamination. Due to
the high demand for traffics and industrial activities in big cities
, a large amount of emissions from those activities is released into the atmosphere, reducing quality of the air. Consequently
, people
living in large cities
easily have respiratory diseases and other health problems
. In addition
, the problem of lack of jobs in big cities
is also
a concern for governments and individuals, due to
the high competition in the labor market. The high rate of unemployment not only puts financial pressure on people
, but also
it leads to social evils such
as : robbery and smuggling.
However
, encouraging people
to move to another city is unrealistic. First of all, life in a bustling city is the dream of most people
. This
is because the standard of living and opportunities for development in big cities
are always better than other ones. Therefore
, it is difficult to prevent people
from choosing to live in metropolises. Besides
, instead
of reducing urban population, the government should have policies to overcome those issues. For example
, the government can encourage people
to use public transportation, which lowers a large amount of dust in the air and contributes to reducing traffic congestion.
In conclusion, the increasing urban population leads to many environmental and life problems
. However
, instead
of encouraging people
to live in other places, the government should have solutions to overcome the disadvantages for people
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