People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
There has been an increasing number of
people
dwelling in metropolises. Use synonyms
Besides
the conventions that urban life offers, city dwellers have to deal with several issues Linking Words
such
as contamination and shortage of jobs. Linking Words
Therefore
, some Linking Words
people
think governments should support Use synonyms
people
to relocate to smaller areas, but I believe Use synonyms
this
is impossible, Linking Words
instead
there are other better solutions.
There are two serious issues that urban residents are facing, namely: pollution - health Linking Words
problems
and high unemployment rate. Use synonyms
Firstly
, population explosion in metropolises lead to many environmental Linking Words
problems
, especially air contamination. Use synonyms
Due to
the high demand for traffics and industrial activities in big Linking Words
cities
, a large amount of emissions from those activities is released into the atmosphere, reducing quality of the air. Use synonyms
Consequently
, Linking Words
people
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cities
easily have respiratory diseases and other health Use synonyms
problems
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In addition
, the problem of lack of jobs in big Linking Words
cities
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also
a concern for governments and individuals, Linking Words
due to
the high competition in the labor market. The high rate of unemployment not only puts financial pressure on Linking Words
people
, but Use synonyms
also
it leads to social evils Linking Words
such
as : robbery and smuggling.
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However
, encouraging Linking Words
people
to move to another city is unrealistic. First of all, life in a bustling city is the dream of most Use synonyms
people
. Use synonyms
This
is because the standard of living and opportunities for development in big Linking Words
cities
are always better than other ones. Use synonyms
Therefore
, it is difficult to prevent Linking Words
people
from choosing to live in metropolises. Use synonyms
Besides
, Linking Words
instead
of reducing urban population, the government should have policies to overcome those issues. Linking Words
For example
, the government can encourage Linking Words
people
to use public transportation, which lowers a large amount of dust in the air and contributes to reducing traffic congestion.
In conclusion, the increasing urban population leads to many environmental and life Use synonyms
problems
. Use synonyms
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, Linking Words
instead
of encouraging Linking Words
people
to live in other places, the government should have solutions to overcome the disadvantages for Use synonyms
people
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