The graph below show the post-school qualifications held by canadians in the age group 25 to 35 and 45 to 55
The pie charts demonstrate some main fields that Canadians aged between 25 and 35 (
group
A), and between 45 and 55 (group
B), held their post-school qualifications.
Overall
, the number of Canadians aged from 25 to 35 holding a degree is more than twice compared to that of those aged from 45 to 55. The majority of the undergraduates from both group
of people choose to Change to a plural noun
groups
further
their education in Social Science and Arts. There were also
increments in most of the sectors examined.
Firstly
, the proportion of students choosing Social Science and Art is the highest figures among the two groups, at 21% in Group
A and 20% in Group
B.Submitted by viethoangnguyen0611 on
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