The graph below show the post-school qualifications held by canadians in the age group 25 to 35 and 45 to 55
The pie charts demonstrate some main fields that Canadians aged between 25 and 35 (
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A), and between 45 and 55 (Use synonyms
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B), held their post-school qualifications.
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, the number of Canadians aged from 25 to 35 holding a degree is more than twice compared to that of those aged from 45 to 55. The majority of the undergraduates from both Linking Words
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of people choose to Change to a plural noun
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their education in Social Science and Arts. There were Linking Words
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increments in most of the sectors examined.
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, the proportion of students choosing Social Science and Art is the highest figures among the two groups, at 21% in Linking Words
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