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As an overseas employee, write a resignation letter to your employer due to an emergency at home. You should write - the reason for leaving, - date of departure, and things that you loved about your job

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Dear Employer, My name is Raghav Sharma, and I am a sales representative in one of your stores. The purpose of writing
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 letter is that I am going to resign
at the end
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 of
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 month. The cause behind the instant leaving
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a job is the critical
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 of my relative, which is so close to my heart.
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, my parents were not telling me
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 thing, because I am living away from them and they don't want me to take any pressure
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situation
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. My relations with the entire staff and management are very good, and I am grateful for
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.
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 a very hard
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 for me to leave
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 job. I have already booked a ticket and am going to attach that below. I am going to depart on
wednesday
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Wednesday
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 28th of
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 month. since I worked for
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 company for the past 4 years, and I am emotionally attached, I want to say goodbye to the whole team before moving
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further
. I am looking forward to hearing from you. I hope you will understand my
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. Yours Faithfully, Raghav Sharma.

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coherence and cohesion
Consider restructuring the letter to have a more formal opening and closing.
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Clarify the reasons for your resignation further to strengthen your explanation, while maintaining a professional tone.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure minor grammatical errors are corrected to improve the overall impression of your writing.
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You clearly stated your departure date and reason for leaving, which is essential for a resignation letter.
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Your expression of gratitude and emotional attachment to the company provides a positive tone to your letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • resignation
  • emergency
  • departure
  • gratitude
  • tenure
  • opportunities
  • support
  • transition
  • training
  • replacement
  • personal growth
  • teamwork
  • positive note
  • success
  • stay in touch
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