You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the Head of Department to change your course. In your letter, explain: what course you are doing now why you are not satisfied with that course what course you would like to change to Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am Shakhlo Eshtukhtaeva. I am writing in order to complain letter to you. Providing that you remember me. I have been working on your
cookery
course
for about two months. Because I would like to cook a lot of very blissful cakes.
Hence
, I have been working on your
cookery
course
.
However
, I can not learn to cook all kinds of cakes in your
cookery
course
. It could be because there are not all facilities in your
cookery
curriculum.
For example
, fridge,oven and others.
That is
more you can not teach some meals to me. So I am going to change my
cookery
curriculum.
This
could be because I am going to learn there are all kinds of food in the world.
Furthermore
, I would like to change my
course
.
Besides
, I already found my new
cookery
course
. Please, you never upset me. It could be because providing that I stay there. I never learned all the food in the world. Yours faithfully, Shakhlo Eshtukhtaeva.
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