You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the Head of Department to change your course. In your letter, explain: what course you are doing now why you are not satisfied with that course what course you would like to change to Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Shakhlo Eshtukhtaeva. I am writing in order to complain letter to you. Providing that you remember me. I have been working on your
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for about two months. Because I would like to cook a lot of very blissful cakes.
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, I have been working on your
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, I can not learn to cook all kinds of cakes in your
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. It could be because there are not all facilities in your
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, fridge,oven and others.
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more you can not teach some meals to me. So I am going to change my
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. Please, you never upset me. It could be because providing that I stay there. I never learned all the food in the world. Yours faithfully, Shakhlo Eshtukhtaeva.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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