The charts below show what UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show what UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate the
number
of graduate and postgraduate
students
in the UK who did not go into full-time employment after completing their college in the year 2008.
Overall
, in both graduated and postgraduate
students
the total
people
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who want to pursue higher studies is higher than part-time, voluntary work and Unemployment and the
number
of postgraduation
students
who did not go for a full-time job is significantly lower than undergraduates.
According to
the table,
further
studies are opted for by the majority of people which is around 2,700 postgraduates,
while
voluntary job seems to be an uncommon option as only 345 postgraduate
students
are working in that field. There are 2,535 people who are working part-time work and the rest of the 1,625 members are jobless. At nearly 30,000 graduates who continued on to
further
studies greatly outnumbered their counterparts who ended up in other situations. In comparison, only 3,500 graduates did voluntary work, making it the least common destination. Those who worked part-time and those who were unemployed were almost similar in
number
.
Moreover
, the
number
of undergraduates who didn't go full-time is almost 10 times more than postgraduates in every position they chose after their degree.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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