Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

One of the discussed issues nowadays is that the students that choose
science
lessons are not enough. It is undeniable that
science
become an essential part of our life. In
this
essay, I will explain some reasons and effects on
society
. One of the main causes of
this
is that people think
science
is something hard to understand. It is a result of, students before high education, when they study in school, do not exactly catch
science
or it because of their teacher that was not teach them better and clearly. The second cause in my view they have all the things that they need.
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, TV , smartphones and
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of technology make their life easier. They never thought about if scientists will decrease and we do not have people to replace scientists who working now, all our convenience will be over. The first effect will be that
society
will stop moving. In our modern time technology is all, we use in all cases, like for study, payment and other things, and if
science
stops, will stop technology,
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lead to
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our
society
.
Furthermore
,
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will affect our nature. We now have a lot of technological tools, that people use to water trees and other flowers.
Therefore
, it will be hard to change these tools in little time. Having weighed all mentioned , we can come to
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that we need to increase interest in
science
for students. So it will be not surprising if
society
will have a big change in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deter
  • promotion
  • opportunities
  • role models
  • lucrative
  • employment
  • gender stereotypes
  • societal norms
  • access to information
  • technological stagnation
  • shortage
  • skilled professionals
  • innovation
  • healthcare sector
  • workforce
  • global competitiveness
  • advancements
  • economic growth
  • public health services
  • environmental sciences
  • combat climate change
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