The pie charts give information about the average household consumption in Japan and Malaysia in five categories.
The pie charts show the information related to the percentages of five different types of household consumption in the two countries, Japan and Malaysia.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that consumption in housing is greater than other categories.
To begin
, people in Japan spend approximately 29% of their expenditure in
other goods and services. Whilst, more than a fifth, 21%, of society Change preposition
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the money for housing needs. After that, it presents about 20%-24% Correct subject-verb agreement
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people have a significant increase in their household expenses for transport and food. Change preposition
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Lastly
, a very small portionof
6% is used for health care.
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On the other hand
, housing consumption in Malaysia showed a large number of 34%. While
,
Malaysian families purchase more food rather than other goods. It can be shown by the percentage shown in the charts around 26% to 27%. The data presents one in ten,10%, use up for transport and 3% in well-being.Remove the comma
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