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The chart gives information about educational studying for both genders in three different periods regarding fulltime or part-time studying in Britain.

The chart gives information about educational studying for both genders in three different periods regarding fulltime or part-time studying in Britain.
The display chart gives data about educational studying for
male
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as well as
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female
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females
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in three different periods regarding
fulltime
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full-time
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 or part-time studying in Britain. In
the
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Britain,
male
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males
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 and
female
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females
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in
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regarding
fulltime
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full-time
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 or part-time studying. In
male
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the male
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, full-time education, in 1970/71 it was 1000, in 1980/81 it was 800 and in 1990/91 it was around 900, in part-time education, in 1970/71 it was 50, in 1980/81 it was 100 and in 1990/91 it was 200. In female, in full-time, in 1970/71 it was 700, in 1980/81 800 and in 1990/91 it was 1100, part-time, in 1970/71 it was 50, in 1980/81 it was 100 and in 1990/91 it was 200.
To conclude
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, the above information describes educational studying for
male
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males
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 and
female
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females
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 in three different periods regarding
fulltime
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full-time
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 or part-time studying in Britain.

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