This letter your work officce does not have any cafteria for staff.

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Dear Sir I hope
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letter is for you in radiant health and the best of spirit. I am writing
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letter with the crucial purpose of complaining, about I work office does not have any cafeteria for staff. I ask you to organize a cafeteria. On the one hand, in first important thing which should be mentioned is that
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causing various inconveniences to the employees. Because some of our employees have some health problems and they usually need to eat fast, but our office does not have the conditions for
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. On the other side, I hope that you will find a solution to
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soon because some of our workers are leaving work
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the lack of a coffee shop, which is causing inconvenience to our office. So you will find a solution to
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soon, it is important to us.
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, having given the previous facts , I hope you will take immediate action in order to solve the issue
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look forward to hearing from you in the future .
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do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully Sarvinoz
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