the chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented acommodation in england and waves between 1918-2011

the chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented acommodation in england and waves between 1918-2011
The chart depicts the proportion of family homes in England and waves divided based on being owned or rented from 1918 to 2011. As illustrated, the percentage of households' proprietorship and renting accommodation underwent significant trends throughout
this
period. The most notable feature in
this
graph is the evergrowing trend of dwelling ownership and the downward tendency of residence leasing. As can be seen, the percentage of rented accommodation in 1918 had been more than double that of acquisition in the same year.
Nonetheless
, figures regarding renting proportions fell considerably and were halved in 2011.
Whereas
, the percentage of ownership experienced a sharp increase of about 40 per cent compared to the first year.
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