the maps below show the xentre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development. summarise the information, by celecting and reporting tha main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The following maps, illustrate how the Islip town centre is at present time and how is going to change in the future through a development plan.
Overall
, the shape of the city centre will be circular, surrounded by a new road. Linking Words
Additionally
, there will be new housing, Linking Words
as well as
s passage for pedestrians only.
As it is shown, a new dual carriageway will be added to the city in a circular way. Linking Words
Furthermore
, there will be more space for the development of new housing, replacing some of the old shops and part of the park, where it seems that it will be smaller.
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Moreover
, in the place where the main road is located, a new pathway for walking persons only will be constructed. As is considered with the shops, in the new plan they will change into a shopping centre and there will be more space for a bus station and car park.Linking Words
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