The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given schemes illustrate the rate of males and females who were recruited in three different countries, namely,
Canada
, South Korea
and Sweden
in two years, 2005 and 2015.
Overall
, obviously, gentlemen were employed more than ladies in all given countries, however
, in South Korea
a tiny percent
of women had a job in comparison to Replace the word
percentage
Sweden
and Canada
.
In 2005, in Sweden
the majority of men were recruited and their Add a comma
,Sweden
number
accounted for an overwhelming 80%, which was almost twice as many as the number
of women who worked in the same country. On the contrary
, the number
of employed males among the Canadians constituted 60%, which was almost 15% less than the number
of males who had a job in South Korea
.
In 2015, there were similar patterns concerning the rate of employees among gentlemen in Canada
and Sweden
, which made up a hefty 70% each. Meanwhile, in Sweden
every second woman was recruited, Add a comma
,Sweden
although
, in South Korea
the Add a comma
,Korea
number
of employed ladies accounted for just over 30 percent
, which was almost one-half of the Change the spelling
per cent
number
of females that worked in Canada
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