The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how tehy rated hotel's customer service.

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how tehy rated hotel's customer service.
The pie graph illustrates the number of consumer services. they inquire, whether they are rated or not in Parkway Hotel. I will give you a comparison between  2005 to 2010.
Overall
, it's clear that in 2005 most people were satisfied, with nearly half of the others service.
However
, in 2010 it appears that the good assessment is about fourth
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if we compare it with other servers. First of all, in 2005 customer service was less than in 2010, which looked at 26% were not happy, and the green colour was just a 14% ratio.
On the other hand
, in 2010,
while
the figure of nations was good, there was an increase largely to 39%, which had been higher, but the number of people who were satisfactory declined to 17%.
Although
, customer review that was not satisfactory, their results decreased to 16%, and
then
, the result of the excellent review was raised to 28% for a total score among other evaluation.
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