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The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how tehy rated hotel's customer service.

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how tehy rated hotel's customer service.
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The pie graph illustrates the number of consumer services. they inquire, whether they are rated or not in Parkway Hotel. I will give you a comparison between  2005 to 2010.
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, it's clear that in 2005 most people were satisfied, with nearly half of the others service.
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, in 2010 it appears that the good assessment is about fourth
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 if we compare it with other servers. First of all, in 2005 customer service was less than in 2010, which looked at 26% were not happy, and the green colour was just a 14% ratio.
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, in 2010,
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 the figure of nations was good, there was an increase largely to 39%, which had been higher, but the number of people who were satisfactory declined to 17%.
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, customer review that was not satisfactory, their results decreased to 16%, and
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, the result of the excellent review was raised to 28% for a total score among other evaluation.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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