The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how tehy rated hotel's customer service.

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how tehy rated hotel's customer service.
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As can be clearly seen from the pie chart evaluating the rated Parkway hotel's customer service depends on the questionnaire method.
Overall
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, The hotel improved the service quality over the 5 years and individuals provided more positive feedback.
To begin
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, Improvement of the services of the Caravansary improved the Excellent rate from 5% in 2005 to 28% in 2010, which is the one-fourth of total response.
In addition
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, the category of Goods increased a significant review from 14% to 39% in the era of 2005 to 2010, respectively which dominated reviews in 2010.
In Contrast
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, The satisfactory percentage reduces from 45% to 17% in the 5 consecutive years.
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, the other two categories are
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declining percentages
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, Poor decreased by 3 % and Very poor by 1% in the 5 consecutive periods.
To sum up
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, Among all 5 categories of rating systems, the Parkway Inn raised their Positive feedback and declined negative responses in the period of 2005 and 2010.
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