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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects.But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject they are good at or find the most interesting.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#people #teenagers #school #subjects #focus
The school education system is the major pillar to to create
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balance
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 person.
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 argument about studying school curriculum, a part of the community
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,that pupils should give their attention
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 the whole
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 areas, and others
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, that the students should identify their own likings in the
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curriculum
, and concentrate
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 those areas. Here, I strongly believe, that teenagers should focus
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complete
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 subject area because it is impossible to reach
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the final exam destinations without complete knowledge. Even though, youngsters could make a decision about their majorings as per their own wish. On the one hand, nowadays, the primary and tertiary educational systems are consisted
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numerous
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due to
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 reason,students, who are willing to complete high studies, it is mandatory to study
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subjects
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 areas,
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 they would not
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 to pass the examinations.
For instance
, Sinhala language and mathematics are
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critical
subjects
 in Sri Lankan
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 examination because if
some one
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 fails these
subjects
,which is caused to fail the examination totally.
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,
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balance
educational
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 attention is
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paramount for
fullfilling
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fulfilling
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future targets.
On the other hand
, personal
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favouritism
 is
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 undeniable motivation factor for any human owing to
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student
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a student
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 who has a talent and liking about some specific area could change his complete life positively.
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, there are
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number
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 of
nobel
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 price holders, who failed in the schooling system ,but they could reach their life goals through the specific
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curriculum
 even though
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 of people are very few
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 the earth,majority of the young people end their education
due to
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responsible citizens ,everyone should encourage
young
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the young
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 generation to adopt
to
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the balance
learning
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of learning
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 works.
Otherwise
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the effect
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effect
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affect
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on
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their sustainable future
inversly
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inversely
.
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