The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting a reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar charts give data on the gross figure of minutes in
billions
of phone tells in the UK, divided into local, mobiles
, Fix the agreement mistake
mobile
and
national and international over a period 7-year from 2001 to 2008.
It can be seen from the graph that the integral quantity of minutes for Correct word choice
apply
local
sector Correct article usage
the local
higher
than Add a missing verb
is higher
other
areas. Change preposition
in other
Also
, mobiles, national and international upward trend substantially.
First of all, the count of minutes of telephone calls for mobiles had hit the highest point about
44 Change preposition
of about
billions
from 2 units in 2001 to 46 units in 2008. In terms of national and international, the two Change to singular
billion
region
experience Change to a plural noun
regions
significant
increase from 38 to 61 Add an article
a significant
billions
after 7 years.
Looking at the graph more closely, we can see the number Change to singular
billion
calls
for local Change preposition
of calls
rapidly
growth from 72 to 90 units between 2001 and 2005. Change the adverb
rapid
Then
there was
suffered a Unnecessary verb
apply
quickly declined
with 84 and 72 Replace the word
quick decline
billions
for 2006 and 2008 respectively. Change to singular
billion
Overall
, the data in local still stayed the sameSubmitted by quynhtranhbh on
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