The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting a reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given bar charts give data on the gross figure of minutes in

billions

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of phone tells in the UK, divided into local,

mobiles

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mobile

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and

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apply

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national and international over a period 7-year from 2001 to 2008. It can be seen from the graph that the integral quantity of minutes for

local

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the local

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sector

higher

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is higher

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than

other

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in other

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areas.

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, mobiles, national and international upward trend substantially. First of all, the count of minutes of telephone calls for mobiles had hit the highest point

about

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of about

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billions

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billion

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from 2 units in 2001 to 46 units in 2008. In terms of national and international, the two

region

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regions

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experience

significant

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a significant

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increase from 38 to 61

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billions

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billion

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after 7 years. Looking at the graph more closely, we can see the number

calls

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of calls

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for local

rapidly

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growth from 72 to 90 units between 2001 and 2005.

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there

was

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apply

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suffered a

quickly declined

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with 84 and 72

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billions

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billion

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for 2006 and 2008 respectively.

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, the data in local still stayed the same

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Vocabulary: Replace the words billions with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

165 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

total number of minutes
telephone calls
categories
local – fixed line
national and international – fixed line
mobiles
general trend
yearly totals
significant changes
milestones
data
rise significantly
decline
steady increase
fluctuate
peak
exponential growth
over the period

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