The pie charts give information about the average household consumption in Japan and Malaysia in five categories.

The pie charts give information about the average household consumption in Japan and Malaysia in five categories.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The charts depict information about the average percentage of households in two countries in housing, transport, food, well-being and other goods.
Overall
Linking Words
, it is noticeable that Malaysia obtained the largest percentage of housing,
whereas
Linking Words
it
also
Linking Words
had the lowest proportion of energy care.
To begin
Linking Words
with Japan, there was a negligible difference between housing and transport, namely 21 % and 20 %. In terms of food, it accounted for 24 % which is four times bigger than health care ( 6 %). The figure for other goods obtained the highest percentage of households in Japan throughout the period. With regards to Malaysia, the figure for strength care accounted for 3 % which is over 3 times smaller than transport ( 10 %).
Consequently
Linking Words
, it was the type of household which was less consumed over the period in question.
However
Linking Words
, the rate for other goods and food shared a similar proportion, namely 26 % and 27 % .
Furthermore
Linking Words
, housing was the kind of housing which was highly used throughout the period.
Submitted by aikumarbekarys on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: