The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Aisian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with prediction for 2030 and 2040.
The given graph demonstrates the percentages of the population in four different Asian countries,Philippines,Malaysia,Thailand,
Indonesia
for Correct word choice
and Indonesia
seven
Correct determiner usage
a
year
time period starting from 1970.
Taken as a whole,Correct your spelling
seven-year
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