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Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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The more
production
people
 have, the more
waste
 they get
at the end
 of the day. Humankind supplies their nutrition needs with agriculture, even though it causes
food
 losses and
food
waste
 without
consuming
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consumption
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.
This
 essay will examine the possible reasons for
this
 problem and suggest solutions that society can implement in their life. Since the amount of whole
food
production
 is getting bigger, it results in eating and eventually throwing away more
food
. In fact,
people
 get served approximately two times higher portions per plate now compared to 15 years ago,
therefore
 there is much possibility of foods turning into
waste
. The second factor depends on the
people
's way of thinking, which is a mindset that needs to be adopted by society, known as "The less is more". In a developing world,
although
 many
people
 reach every item without any effort, in
this
case
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case,
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food
, enables them to think they could obtain them anytime they want, others know that it's an unnecessary energy and natural source consumption. If the way we behave could change, can we control the amount of
waste
 we cause? The answer is Yes. Once the misconception that
food
waste
 could be degraded in soil effortlessly is cleared up, and awareness raised about how complex it is to utilize
food
waste
, there will be an enormous amount of
waste
 will be curbed even if the portions cannot be reduced in the restaurants. The European Union,
for instance
, published sustainable development goals with the aim of countries to take action to ensure responsible
production
 and consumption. In conclusion, with
mentioned
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 perspective above, governments could invest in startups
who
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that
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 are aiming to use
food
waste
 in their
production
, so that it will help
people
 get aware and expand it on a global scale.
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