Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

People have different views on whether college students should learn other courses except their own

subjects

,

while

others reckon they ought to focus on a qualification. I do believe that it is more beneficial to study more

subjects

. On the one hand, there are many reasons why they want to choose one subject.

To begin

with, giving all time to studying for a degree is less stressful at the university because the lesson is relatively less than others who choose other

subjects

.

Furthermore

, working for an apprenticeship can improve many

job

experience which is good for them to find a decent

job

in the future.

For example

, current

job

positions are looking for an employee who has operation skills which can only be obtained through taking part in

such

apprenticeship.

On the other hand

, learning other courses

in addition

to their major is important for their width of employment. Because they can learn other knowledge which is useful to combine with their main

subjects

.

For example

, some students who study finance choose courses in computer science, as a

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result that they can use the knowledge of coding to build the process of an auto trading system. If they don't have

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abilities , they will not get an ideal

job

in future. In conclusion, I can understand the reasons why individuals tip the balance in favour of just focusing on one subject,

although

it may less stress and have time to get an apprenticeship , I would argue that they can benefit more from the diversity of knowledge.