The table shows data about the underground railway systems in six major cities with the date opened, kilometers of the route, and passenger numbers per year in millions.
The table gives information about underground railway infrastructure in six cities by considering the
kilometres
of the route
and the number of passengers
each year (in millions).Overall
, it is readily apparent that Kyoto involves the least number of passengers
while
Tokyo contains the most.
According to
Kyoto, it only accounted for 45 million passengers
through 11 kilometres
of the route
in 1981. Similarly
, Los Angeles experienced merely a half million visitors alongside 28 kilometres
of the route
in 2001, while
both Tokyo and Paris stood at the most number of passengers
,1928 and 1191 alongside 155 and 199 km respectively.
Looking at London Row,although
it had the longest route
(394 kilometres
), it saw just 775 million passengers
in 1863. In contrast
, Washington DC had a shorter route
, only 126km,and there were 144 m visitors In 1976.Submitted by mirhashemim7 on
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