The table shows data about the underground railway systems in six major cities with the date opened, kilometers of the route, and passenger numbers per year in millions.
The table gives information about underground railway infrastructure in six cities by considering the
kilometres
of the Use synonyms
route
and the number of Use synonyms
passengers
each year (in millions).Use synonyms
Overall
, it is readily apparent that Kyoto involves the least number of Linking Words
passengers
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while
Tokyo contains the most.
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According to
Kyoto, it only accounted for 45 million Linking Words
passengers
through 11 Use synonyms
kilometres
of the Use synonyms
route
in 1981. Use synonyms
Similarly
, Los Angeles experienced merely a half million visitors alongside 28 Linking Words
kilometres
of the Use synonyms
route
in 2001, Use synonyms
while
both Tokyo and Paris stood at the most number of Linking Words
passengers
,1928 and 1191 alongside 155 and 199 km respectively.
Looking at London Row,Use synonyms
although
it had the longest Linking Words
route
(394 Use synonyms
kilometres
), it saw just 775 million Use synonyms
passengers
in 1863. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Washington DC had a shorter Linking Words
route
, only 126km,and there were 144 m visitors In 1976.Use synonyms
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