The table shows data about the underground railway systems in six major cities with the date opened, kilometers of the route, and passenger numbers per year in millions.

The table shows data about the underground railway systems in six major cities with the date opened, kilometers of the route, and passenger numbers per year in millions.
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The table gives information about underground railway infrastructure in six cities by considering the
kilometres
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of the
route
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and the number of
passengers
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each year (in millions).
Overall
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, it is readily apparent that Kyoto involves the least number of
passengers
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while
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Tokyo contains the most.
According to
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Kyoto, it only accounted for 45 million
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through 11
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of the
route
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in 1981.
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, Los Angeles experienced merely a half million visitors alongside 28
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of the
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in 2001,
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both Tokyo and Paris stood at the most number of
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,1928 and 1191 alongside 155 and 199 km respectively. Looking at London Row,
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it had the longest
route
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(394
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), it saw just 775 million
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in 1863.
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, Washington DC had a shorter
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, only 126km,and there were 144 m visitors In 1976.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words kilometres, route, passengers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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