The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whererelevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whererelevant.
These tables represent data about Fairtrade turnover of
coffee
and
bananas
in five European lands in 1999 and 2004. we can notice here growth easily except
some
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for some
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tiny decline. The rate in the UK for
coffee
showed a sharp increase
whereas
Switzerland stood
first
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in first
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place for
bananas
. In 1999, the UK presented a sum of € 1.5 in
coffee
. Later, It soared to € 20
million
. The statistics for Switzerland doubled in 2004.
Besides
, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden showed a little bit of uprise. In the segment of
Bananas
,
switzerland
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Switzerland
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was the topper
while
the UK faced € 4.5
million
incline than 1999. Belgium did well and stood at € 4
million
from € 0.6
million
in 2004. Some
exception
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exceptions
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can be seen here in the statistics. Though Sweden and Denmark faced a slight improvement in
coffee
, they failed to hold their enhancement in
bananas
. Their decline was € 0.8
million
and € 1.1
million
compared to 1999 with 2004 in
bananas
.
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