In many urban areas, traffic congestion is a growing problem. What are the main causes of this issue, and how can it be effectively addressed?

Traffic
jam is
thriving
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issue in most
megapolises
.
Main
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cause of
this
phenomenon is
outgrowth
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of the living world. I personally think that to address
this
problem effectively,
government
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the government
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should increase the number of public
transports
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transport
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.
Firstly
, some consider cars as a main factor of
traffic
congestion;
however
,
expanding
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the expanding
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population of urban areas
is outweigh
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the other factors. As
population
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the population
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grow, the
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for
a
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transport increase. Today, in big cities almost every family has a car and
this
affects
traffic
negatively. For one thing,
according to
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the
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research conducted by Cambridge
university
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found that 80
percent
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of the increment in vehicles is mostly associated with population growth.
Thus
,
this
issue has its solution. To overcome
this
phenomenon some restorations should be done. Public
transportations
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transportation
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in
megapolises
are
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is
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not enough to meet that problem, so
government
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the government
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should improve them
such
as, recreating its interior, expanding its size, and transforming
them
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it
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into
a
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rapid transport.
For instance
, researchers in Sweden implied that
improved
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system of
the
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apply
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public transportation in one of the
megapolises
decreased
traffic
congestion.
Thus
, the solution
of
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the
traffic
jam
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jams
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in urban areas can be dissolved by public
transportations
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transportation
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.
To conclude
,
traffic
congestion is a general problem in most
megapolises
, and it can be addressed by
improvising
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public transportation.
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