The chart below shows the percentages of males and females with higher education qualifications in 5 countries in 2001.
The diagram illustrates the proportion of men and women with advanced educational
certificates
in Switzerland, Britain, Japan, United
States and Germany by the year 2001.
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Overall
it is immediately apparent that both men and women comparatively had qualifications for advanced studies.
To begin
with, both Switzerland and Germany observed the highest percentage of people who acquired certificates
for pursuing higher education at 45%. Interestingly, that
the same number of men as women acquired Correct word choice
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certificates
for higher studies in Switzerland and Germany at 45% and 35% and vice versa for the gender in the respective countries.
Turning to Britain and the United States, the same proportion of males gained certificates
for higher education at 35%. Meanwhile, 40% of females did in America whilst 10% less than this
figure obtained certificates
in Britain. By contrast
, Japan recorded the least qualifiers for both genders among the 5 countries with only 30% of males and 25% of females.Submitted by nmaureen03 on
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