The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram presents the process of producing drinking
water
from gathering rainwater in a town in Australia. Overall
, water
is processed through three main steps from the filter to the chemical treatment to serve consumers.
Firstly
, when it rains, each house collects rainwater from its roof and goes through gutters, eventually running into drains at the bottom of the house. Then
the installed one large pipe underneath of houses gathers water
from four houses and sends water
through a filter to remove physical, biological and chemical contaminations from various causes as a result
of making purified water
.
Secondly
, after the process of water
filtration from households, filtered water
is kept in a large industrial size of storage tank to move on to the next final step. The last
procedure is water
treatment which is so-called sanitization to produce safe drinkable water
for the public. In fact, the water
storage tank and the treatment tank are connected with one duct and a couple of factories are built it on, eventually, water
is treated by releasing chemicals from an upper building and carried away to houses in a town. Finally
, rainwater is used without any adverse events.Submitted by slowloris4444 on
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