Many people see animals as tools to be used by humans to better their lives. They believe animals should help feed us and keep us healthy by being subjects to experiments that will lead to new medications and medical processes. Others believe that animals should have the same rights to a good life as humans. Discuss both views and state your own.

Numerous individuals
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believe
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that
animals
should be used by
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humans
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to feed us and use them as
laboratary
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laboratory
experiment subjects.
However
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,
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others
beleive
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believe
that
animals
are
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have
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rights as humans and
they
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that they
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should be used for
consumpation
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consumption
or laboratory
experiemnts
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experiments
experiment
. In
this
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I will
prsent
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present
both views and provide my opinion on
this
.
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with ,
Animals
are
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have been
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used as
food
or
subject
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subjects
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of laboratory
experiment
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experiments
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from
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for
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hundred
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of years. As
human
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the human
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race
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we have exploited them for our
benefits
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. be it for
food
or for scientific experiments.
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, Since 1600 we
are
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have been
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experimentsing
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experimenting
on different
animals
for
discovery
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the discovery
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of medicine and
it
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its
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effects on human
being
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beings
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.
i
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believe that we should have avoided that.
in
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my opinion
animals
should not be used for scientific
purpose
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purposes
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or for
food
.
However
, Most
animals
are
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have been
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used as pets since human
civilzation
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civilisation
has
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apply
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started. we have
use
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used
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them for our benefits and
food
,
scientific
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and scientific
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purpose
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purposes
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. we are hugely dependent on
animals
for
food
and scientific
purpose
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purposes
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.To cite an example,
ORganisation
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organisations
like
peta
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are advocating for
ethical
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the ethical
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treatment towards
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the animal
an animal
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animal
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animals
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. we should be kind and considerate of their contribution.
Still
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i
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I
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am of
opinion
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the opinion
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that
animals
should not be used as subjects to scientific experiments. In conclusion ,
Although
we have realised manifold benefits from
animals
we should be considerate of them and should not use them as
subject
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subjects
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of experiments or
food
. I
belief
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believe
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that
such
parctices
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practices
are unethical and we should come up with other
option
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options
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. we should have
start
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started
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respecting their existence.
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