The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates some information about four types of
meat
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consumed between 1079 and 2004 in European countries.
Overall
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, beef and lamb
consumption
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declined with fluctuation throughout the period.
While
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chicken
meat
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became the
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choice of European people in the later years. The fish
consumption
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displayed an almost constant trend till the end. To be more specific, in 1979, lamb and chicken
consumption
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was almost the same with 150
grams
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per
person
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per week.
After
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this
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, lamb
consumption
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showed a decreasing trend with fluctuation and ended up with a
consumption
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of approximately 70
grams
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per
person
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per week in 2004.
While
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the
consumption
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of chicken
meat
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increased to 240
grams
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per
person
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per week throughout the period. The average fish
meat
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eaten by European people remained constant between 40-60
grams
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till 2004. A single
person
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used to eat 220
grams
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of beef
meat
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in 1979 which increased to 245
grams
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and
then
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drastically decreased to 110 gm in the year 2004.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words meat, consumption, grams, person with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • metric tons
  • fluctuations
  • upward/downward trend
  • stabilize
  • peak
  • trough
  • overtake
  • steady decline/increase
  • sustainable
  • dietary habits
  • preferences
  • health consciousness
  • per capita
  • poultry
  • veal
  • stagnant
  • gradual
  • surpass
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