You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

Dear Sir, I hope
this
letter finds you in good health and in high spirits ! I am writing
this
letter to order a mobile phone of Samsung brand. I am a patron of Samsung mobile and would like to purchase the latest model which is S11 from your store.
Furthermore
, I would like to enquire if the
product
is not available, will you be able to order it from the factory. I need
this
mobile for my mother's birthday and I would be very grateful if you could order
this
product
at the earliest.
Additionally
, I would like to know the price details of
this
brand and the bank account details for payment.
Additionally
, I would like to inform you that I hold a membership card from your store which is 1234567 and I would like to avail
discount
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the discount
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for
this
product
.
In addition
, I would request you to hold
this
product
until
this
week Sunday, as I am planning to travel back to Visakhapatnam
this
week Friday. I won't be able to collect
this
product
before
friday
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Friday
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because I have some personal work in my home town. I hope you will make the necessary arrangements Yours Sincerely, Shreyashi
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the letter follows a logical structure with clear paragraphs for each topic.
coherence cohesion
Include a formal greeting at the beginning of the letter and a suitable closing at the end.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas into separate paragraphs, each focusing on a single main idea.
task achievement
Ensure that all the required information is included in the letter.
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Use a consistently formal and appropriate tone throughout the letter.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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