The maps below show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 to 2005. Write at least 150 words
The supplied illustrations demonstrate changes in the Youngsville plan after 25 years.
In general, over a period a lot of trees were chopped off and, the railway was extended.
In ,Youngsville there is the river Alanah that divides the city into two parts, to the north and south. On the northern side of the
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town there were a bunch of private houses, but in 2005 they were replaced with a stadium and parking zone. There is Remove the comma
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a lake in Youngsville which was dotted with trees at the end
of the 20th century, however
after two and a half decades they were cut down and replaced with a park.
On the bottom side of the map, all houses were demolished and all trees were chopped down to be replaced with skyscrapers, warehouses and factories. Woodland transformed into factories. As was said before, the railway station after a quarter century was fully built, and a marina was constructed near the station. Obviously, some buildings remained such
as hospitals, schools and airports.Submitted by aikumarbekarys on
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