The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph demonstrates the yearly
income
of three bakeries (Amandine Bakery
, Mari
Bakeshop
, Bolo
Cakery) in the city of Calgary between 2000 and 2010.
Correct word choice
and Bolo
Overall
, it is clear that
throughout the period the revenue of Mari
Bakeshop
greatly fluctuated, whereas
two other bakeries witnessed an increase, although
most of the time the income
of Amandine Bakery
remained stable.
Initially
, Bolo
Cakery had the lowest earnings in the year 2000, which constituted roughly 20000$, compared with Mari
Bakeshop
which started at the peak of the chart and accounted for nearly 80000$. In terms of Amandine Bakery
, the revenue was quiescent the first five years at just less than 60000$, before it rocketed to over 100000$, which is the biggest figure of all. In relation to Bolo
Bakery
, the sales hovered till 2003 and consequently
levelled out at about 40000$ in 2003-2006.
In 2004 the earnings of Mari
Bakeshop
boomed from 80000$ to almost 100000$, however
, afterwards they began to gradually decrease.Eventually, between 2007 and 2008 Bolo
Cakery managed to surpass the annual income
of Mari
Bakeshop
. Finally
, Mari
Bakeshop
stabilised at 40000$ from 2008 till the end of the given period. In the matter of Bolo
Bakery
, whose income
culminated in approximately 60000$.Submitted by belchicovaa on
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