The bar chart shows the ammount spent on digital games in the USA and China from 2010 to 2017 and the pie chart shows global spending on these games in 2017.

#bar #ammount #games #usa #china

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

The chart below illustrates information about four different countries

traveller

Fix the agreement mistake

travellers

show examples

who

visit

Wrong verb form

visited

show examples

Greece in August 2019 and

enjoy

Wrong verb form

enjoyed

show examples

different

type

Fix the agreement mistake

types

show examples

of hobbies.

According to

Linking Words

the information provided, we can see that

Use synonyms

Chinese

Correct article usage

the Chinese

show examples

are the

most

Fix the agreement mistake

apply

show examples

tourists

Use synonyms

who

spent

Wrong verb form

spend

show examples

time

Use synonyms

Change preposition

apply

show examples

reading books

Change preposition

during

show examples

their fun

time

Use synonyms

In contrast

Linking Words

Use synonyms

Brazilian

Replace the word

Brazilians

show examples

enjoy spending most of their

time

Use synonyms

at the beach. Meanwhile,

Chinese

Use synonyms

tourists

Use synonyms

and

Brazilian

Use synonyms

tourists

Use synonyms

both

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

didn’t

spent

Change the verb form

spend

show examples

much

time

Use synonyms

Change preposition

apply

show examples

Visiting places. If we look more closely, we notice that

Chinese

Use synonyms

tourists

Use synonyms

spend 8 hours Reading books.

In contrast

Linking Words

Brazilian

Use synonyms

spent 6 hours at the beach. Meanwhile, American and Turkish

tourists

Use synonyms

spent 3 hours visiting places. To summarize, the chart shows that

Use synonyms

Correct article usage

the chinese

show examples

chinese

Change the capitalization

Chinese

show examples

interested

Add a missing verb

are interested

show examples

in spending

time

Use synonyms

reading rather than other leisure activities.

While

Linking Words

American

Fix the agreement mistake

Americans

show examples

, Turkish and

Use synonyms

brazilian

Correct your spelling

Brazilians

interested

Add a missing verb

are interested

show examples

to do

Change preposition

in doing

show examples

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

136 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6.5
band
Credit card make people to indebted. Does the advantage of credit card outweigh their drawbacks.
Nowadays people cannot imagine their lives without credit cards, which makes them financially obligated. This essay will demonstrate how credit cards make people's lives much easier, however, spending more beyond their means will have negative effects on their credit scores.
7.5
band
Some people think that the government should provide assistance to all kinds of artist including painters, musicians and poets. However, other people think that this is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In contemporary society, there is ongoing debate regarding whether governments should allocate resources to support artists including painters, musicians and poets. While some argue that such assistance is crucial for fostering creativity and preserving cultural heritage, others believe that it is a waste of public funds. This essay agrees that a balanced approach to supporting artists is beneficial for the majority of people as well as the artists.
6.5
band
In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, it is a debatable issue that only a few youngsters would prefer to read a newspaper or watch it on their smart devices. This essay will provide various causes and possible solutions to this question in the following paragraphs with related examples.
5.5
band
You have got one week break from your office and you want to go on a trip with your uncle as you both like adventurous activities. Write an emaill to your uncle to ask to go on a trip with you. Write an email to your uncle in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things: : What you can do thore Where and when you want to go * Why do you want to go with your uncle only?
I hope this mail finds you well. I have been thinking about taking advantage of a break from the office and going on an adventure, and I could not think of anyone better to accompany me than you.
6
band
You have been working in a company for three years, but now wish to leaving job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter: • What have you learned while working for the company • Did you enjoyed working there • What are your reasons for leaving the job
I hope this email finds you in radiant health and you are doing well. I’m writing to you to give information about my resignation I have decided recently

The bar chart shows the ammount spent on digital games in the USA and China from 2010 to 2017 and the pie chart shows global spending on these games in 2017.

Credit card make people to indebted. Does the advantage of credit card outweigh their drawbacks.

Some people think that the government should provide assistance to all kinds of artist including painters, musicians and poets. However, other people think that this is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You have been working in a company for three years, but now wish to leaving job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter: • What have you learned while working for the company • Did you enjoyed working there • What are your reasons for leaving the job