The bar chart shows the ammount spent on digital games in the USA and China from 2010 to 2017 and the pie chart shows global spending on these games in 2017.

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The chart below illustrates information about four different countries

traveller

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travellers

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who

visit

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Greece in August 2019 and

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enjoyed

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different

type

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types

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of hobbies.

According to

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the information provided, we can see that

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Chinese

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the Chinese

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are the

most

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apply

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tourists

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who

spent

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spend

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time

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apply

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reading books

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during

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their fun

time

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In contrast

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Brazilian

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Brazilians

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enjoy spending most of their

time

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at the beach. Meanwhile,

Chinese

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tourists

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and

Brazilian

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tourists

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both

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apply

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didn’t

spent

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spend

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much

time

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apply

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Visiting places. If we look more closely, we notice that

Chinese

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tourists

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spend 8 hours Reading books.

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Brazilian

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spent 6 hours at the beach. Meanwhile, American and Turkish

tourists

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spent 3 hours visiting places. To summarize, the chart shows that

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the chinese

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chinese

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Chinese

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interested

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are interested

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in spending

time

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reading rather than other leisure activities.

While

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American

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Americans

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, Turkish and

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brazilian

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Brazilians

interested

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are interested

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to do

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in doing

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

136 words

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The bar chart shows the ammount spent on digital games in the USA and China from 2010 to 2017 and the pie chart shows global spending on these games in 2017.

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The governments should give each citizen a basic income so that they have enough money to live on, even if they are unemployed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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