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The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.

The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.
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The chart displays the
percentage
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 of first-year
students
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 from 3 majors that gave a highly favourable review of
resources
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 provided by a college. It is split into 5 types of
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:
Pre-course
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 information, Teaching, Tutor,
Print
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 and others.
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, Commerce
students
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 seem to be the most satisfied with all 5 categories of
resources
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 provided by the school. Meanwhile, on average, Economics
Students
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 view the teaching and professors of the school in high regard
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 but seem to have a problem with the
pre-course
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 information. Specifically, around 93% to 95% of Commerce
students
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 gave the school’s tutor, teaching and
pre-course
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 info a ‘very good’ rating. For
print
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 and other
resources
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, the
percentage
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 of first-years experienced a slight decrease to 85% and 81% respectively. For Economics undergraduates, the
percentage
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 of
students
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 who are happy with the teaching, tutoring and
print
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resources
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 remained largely the same, at 95%, 90% and 81% respectively.
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, there is a huge difference in satisfaction levels for other areas as only 59% of
students
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 are pleased with the provided
pre-course
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 info and 60% for other
resources
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. For Law freshmen, the
percentage
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 of
students
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 that are favourable to the provided
resources
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 is between 60% - 80%, with it peaking at 80% for other
resources
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 and going as low as 62% for teaching. The other three categories are all stable at around 70%, 72% and 76% for
print
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resources
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,
pre-course
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 info and tutors respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, students, resources, pre-course, print with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "gave" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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