the graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2030
The line chart elucidates the number of UK commuters travelling on a regular basis in three popular vehicles namely
car
, bus
and train
.
In general, while
the total quanties
of individuals who travel by Correct your spelling
number
car
and train
are
predicted to witness an increasing trend over the period, the opposite side is Correct subject-verb agreement
is
forcasted
to be true for that of Correct your spelling
forecasted
Bus
.
In 1970, Car
was the most prevalent Correct article usage
the Car
mean
of transport for commuters in the UK, which accounted for 5 Fix the agreement mistake
means
million
, 2 and 4 million
higher than those of Bus
and Correct article usage
the Bus
Train
respectively. In the next thirty years, while
around 7 million
people use car
to transport and exactly 3 Add an article
the car
a car
for
Change preposition
by
Train
, the figure for Bus
dwindled slightly to nearly 3 million
during the time depicted.
By 2030, the number of commuters travel
by Wrong verb form
travelling
car
is expected to have a dramatic escaltion
to 9 Correct your spelling
escalation
million
, and that of Train
is forecasted to surge to 5 million
. Conversely
, the figure for Bus
is foreseen to plummet and terminate at 3 million
people.Submitted by ruozzo3095 on
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