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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of businesses in the UK who had a social media presence.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of businesses in the UK who had a social media presence.
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bar chart gives information about
business
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 rates in three different levels in the UK who owned social
media
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 accounts between 2012 and 2016.
Overall
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, the use of social
media
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 by
businesses
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 experienced an upward trend in 2016,
while
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 a downward trend was observed in 2015. In 2012, the rate of using social
media
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 was around 30% in small and
medium
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businesses
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 and about 80% in large
businesses
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. In 2013,
this
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 figure increased in
medium
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 and large
businesses
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 by roughly 20% and 50% respectively. In 2014, these figures stayed at the same level.
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, in 2015, the use of social
media
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 for the purpose of
business
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 sharply decreased by
medium
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 and large companies and stayed at 30% and around 50% respectively. In 2016, the need for social applications was highly demanded by large
business
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 owners around 80% and the same figure was lower by roughly 30% for small and
medium
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business
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 owners.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words business, media, businesses, medium with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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