The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected these regions of the world the 1990s.
The pie chart illustrates the most important reasons for low productivity in agricultural land and the table gives information about three regions namely, North America, Europe and Oceania which faced these causes during
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Overall
, the highest and lowest percentage of over-grazing and other reasons is 35% and 7% respectively.
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