The line graph shows the population figure of different types of turtles in india between1980 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features.

The line graph shows the population figure of different types of turtles in india  between1980 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features.
The line graph illustrates the number of different
species
of
turtles
living in India from the
year
1980 to 2012.
Overall
the population of the different
species
of
turtles
were the same, but over the years
this
trend changed. The Leatherback
Turtles
showed the highest reduction from the first
year
to the
last
one, whilst the proportion of the Olive Ridley
Turtles
presented the highest increase. The figures for the Leatherback
Turtles
decreased
betwee
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between
1988 to 2012, after having an
inconscistent
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inconsistent
increase
in
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1980 to 1987, the number of its
populations
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went from 100 to 60 in 2012.
On the other hand
, despite some fluctuations, the
species
of Olive Ridley
turtles
had
increase
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increased
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from 100 to over 130 in the
year
2012. For Green
Turtles
, the trend was less consistent, having some fluctuations during the period but ending with a similar figure as when it started, from 100 in the first
year
to a
liitle
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little
bit more than 100 in the
last
year
. Between the period, the numbers for All
Species
followed a similar pattern, presenting some fluctuations but not growing a lot, starting with 100 and ending with almost the same number.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words species, turtles, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • The line graph illustrates
  • depicts
  • changes
  • population figures
  • types of turtles
  • Olive Ridley
  • Leatherback
  • Green turtles
  • measured in thousands
  • the highest
  • followed by
  • remained stable
  • significant decline
  • decreased sharply
  • reached its lowest point
  • gradual increase
  • increased steadily
  • experienced a slight decline
  • remained relatively stable
  • fluctuations
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