The line graph shows the population figure of different types of turtles in india between1980 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features.
The line graph illustrates the number of different
species
of turtles
living in India from the year
1980 to 2012.
Overall
the population of the different species
of turtles
were the same, but over the years this
trend changed. The Leatherback Turtles
showed the highest reduction from the first year
to the last
one, whilst the proportion of the Olive Ridley Turtles
presented the highest increase.
The figures for the Leatherback Turtles
decreased betwee
1988 to 2012, after having an Correct your spelling
between
inconscistent
increase Correct your spelling
inconsistent
in
1980 to 1987, the number of its Change preposition
from
populations
went from 100 to 60 in 2012. Fix the agreement mistake
population
On the other hand
, despite some fluctuations, the species
of Olive Ridley turtles
had increase
from 100 to over 130 in the Change the verb form
increased
year
2012.
For Green Turtles
, the trend was less consistent, having some fluctuations during the period but ending with a similar figure as when it started, from 100 in the first year
to a liitle
bit more than 100 in the Correct your spelling
little
last
year
. Between the period, the numbers for All Species
followed a similar pattern, presenting some fluctuations but not growing a lot, starting with 100 and ending with almost the same number.Submitted by dannie.sanval on
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