The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams

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crime

rates with various ages

as well as

the types of

crime

in the United Kingdom in the

preceeding

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preceding

year. It is immediately apparent from the line graph that adolescents were involved in more criminal activities. From the pie

chart

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it is clear that

violent

crime

formed the majority of criminal acts

whereas

public order

crimes

were the least. With regards to the line graph,

crime

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rate stood at 0 at the age of

8years

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8 years

. It

however

rose gradually to about 5

tens

of

thousands

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crimes

between ages 8 and 12. Interestingly, at 12

years

, it made a sharp rise reaching 70

tens

of

thousands

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involving

16-

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16 years

years

- olds.

Furthermore

, there was a steady increase in criminal activities plummeting at 80

tens

of

thousands

among people aged 20

years

.

However

, beyond

this

age,

crime

rates plunged to 20

tens

of

thousands

at 28

years

. The subsequent ages committed

crimes

at a steady rate falling to fewer than 10

tens

of

thousands

violence

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. Turning to the pie image, violent activities were noted to make

nearly

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50% of all

crime

rates. Half as many

as

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the people who committed violent

crimes

were involved in property stealing.

Also

, drug handlers were just overly double the individuals who indulged in public order

crimes

.