Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. ​ To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Across the globe, the

Price

of

everythingis

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everything is

everything

rising with the

increasing

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increase

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of

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in

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pollution

.

However

, the

price

of Petrol which is increasing

help

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helps

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in

reduces

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reducing

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the

traffic

which helps in

pollution related

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pollution-related

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problem

to decrease . The main

Reason

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reason

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behind that

it

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is it

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will help in reducing the

vehicles

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number of vehicles

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and it will decrease

the

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apply

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pollution

.

To begin

with, The rise in

oil

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the oil

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rate will help in reducing

traffic

because of

less vehicle

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fewer vehicles

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there is no

problem

traffic

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with traffic

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.

For example

, The less vehicle

help

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helps

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the transport company to earn more money and it will

also

save the People money too.

moreover

, it will help the Job people and School going to reach

there

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their

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place

at

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on

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time because of less

traffic

and less congestion . it will help in decreasing the

pollution

which is coming from

the

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apply

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vehicles

vand

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and

help in Keeping the environment clean.

on the contrary

,

This

Price

creates

problem

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a problem

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for people who

has

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have

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their own vehicles and they find

comfortable

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it comfortable

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to go from one place to another without any hurdles but due

increasing

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increase

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in

Price

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the Price

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of oil

it

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apply

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will

creates

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create

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problem

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a problem

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for them to save their money as they have to look after their family . Even, the issue related to

pollution

will not decrease by looking

on

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at

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one aspect only.

Hence

,

by

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apply

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increasing the

price

will not help in

such

things .

To Sum up

, the

price

of

bill

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the bill

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will help during the congestion on

road

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the road

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and

also

reduce

pollution

. But

according to

me, it will not help

in

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to

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reduce

problem

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the problem

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of

traffic

and

Pollution

because there are many other

reason

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reasons

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which create

Pollution

such

as water

pollution

, noise

pollution

etc.

Therefore

, it will help only to some

extend

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extent

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to reduce it.