With the increasing demand for energy oil and gas, people should look for sources of oil and gas in remote untouched natural places. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages of damaging such areas?

Some people that the natural

sources

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in remote regions should be used to satisfy an incremental consumption of petrol and

gas

nowadays. Whilst it could increase the production of

such

sources

, I personally believe that there are more downsides than merits derived from

this

suggestion. On the one hand, the proponents suggest that

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the scale of

region

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the region

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to look for necessary natural resources is essential since more and more developing countries introduce modern technologies into their daily

life

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, provoking the demand for oil and

gas

growing in size. On top of that, finding energy in remote areas could prevent the market

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monopolied by a few institutions, and ensure a more stable price for everyone.

On the other hand

, there are various drawbacks derived from the situations as

such

, first of all, associated activities done in remote areas could lead to drastic negative effects

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local

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environment, and cause

extinction

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the extinction

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of local species. Take

Amazon

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the Amazon

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as an example, the area has the highest biological diversity, it many species vanished

due to

human activities.

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higher production of traditional

sources

with

cheap

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the cheap

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price

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prices

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could affect the development of clean energies, considering the higher cost and less

convience

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convenience

.

For instance

, there are many

restirctions

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restrictions

to

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solor

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solar

power, including a bigger space required to insulate the

equipments

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,

along with

it, an expensive

reparing

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repairing

fee, if the price of petrol and

gas

fee is cheap, consumers will

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interest in using those clean

envergy

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energy

. To summarise, the energy

crises

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is inevitable nowadays, which

despirately

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desperately

need to be solved, though there

are

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suggestion

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a suggestion

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for looking into rural areas for the

sources

of oil and

gas

, in my perspective,

such

solutions could only stimulate more disadvantages than advantages, not only will endanger the living space for wild animals, but cause negative effects on

development

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the development

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of new energy.