The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors- agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services- to the UK economy in the twentieth century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given graph provides information about how three different sectors , contributed to the economic aspect of the United Kingdom , over a century starting in 1990.
Overall
, the business and financial segment experienced
a
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constant growth .
by contrast
,the
trend
related to manufacturing declined considerably over the mentioned period. Similar to
this
trend
, the graph for agricultural contribution saw a dramatic decrease , reaching its lowest in 2000. As regards, the contribution of business and
financial
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increased substantially by approximately 30 per cent , from 1900 to 2000 , reaching
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almost 30 %
at the end
of the mentioned time period.The
trend
for agriculture began at just under 50 per cent and despite
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minimal growth in 1950 , it continued its downward
trend
throughout the whole period , becoming the least contributed sector in 2000.
Likewise
, the manufacturing
trend
fell moderately from almost 45 per cent to well under 20 % .
This
was the second most contributed sector after business and financial in the year 2000.
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