A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.

Dear John, I hope you are doing well and

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letter finds you in good health and spirits. I know you are having a hard time adjusting to the new school environment, but, don't worry. I'll let you know about the things to do

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so that you won't be bored and feel like home. First of all, you can introduce yourself to some of your peers and get to know

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each other.

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, search for any clubs in your school and join

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a couple of them, so that you can make

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friends

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activities,

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Basketball, baseball etc

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spend your free time exploring the school premises and there will be a lot of new folks to talk and spend the rest of your time. I believe

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suggestion will help you to fit

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the new atmosphere and I will be happy to meet you on

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. I hope to see you soon and take care

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yourself. Yours lovingly John